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My life was good before you came along. I had friends, my mother actually gave a damn about me, half of the people in the world didn't hate me for that matter! You ruined it. You ruined the only happiness I had. And for what?! Just to keep you entertained?!

I'm not a fucking toy! And yet you treat me as such! I have feelings, too! I feel emotions, I've hurt, I've cried, I've wanted to throw myself off the edge of a cliff for all of the hell you've put me through!

I had a wonderful life. I was a normal kid, mostly. I didn't have a dad. I had one friend, but it didn't matter, because we were inseparable. Until that fateful day, when I turned ten, and you came along. I wish I could put you in my place, when my life was ruined.

Why didn't my mother glance my way? Why didn't she fucking give a damn that her only son was leaving home, with her having no way of knowing what was happening to him? You must've brainwashed her, too. You seem to be good at that, you know, manipulating other people.

I guess you must've manipulated him, too, my best friend. I was shocked to find out that he had somehow started hating me overnight. I thought and thought about something I could've done that would've made him so mad at me, so much so I thought I would go insane by trying to find out. I had no clues, other than the fact that your presence was there throughout all of this. I had my suspicions, but who was I to judge? I had no proof of it, after all.

But it got worse.

It seemed I had no more control over my actions. I was forced to accept the Professor's errand, forced to take a Pokemon, force to battle my best friend, furthering his sudden hatred against me. I was forced to partake on a journey into the unknown, unable to control where I went. It was soon I realized what was happening, as your presence grew stronger.

You were in control of me, I realized. You were watching my every move, controlling my every move. You controlled every direction I went, whom I interacted with, whom I battled...all of it. You seemed to enjoy making me do all this, too. I could sense you smiling as you would make me K.O yet another trainer's Pokemon, make me seem like a heartless, cruel jerk to the other trainers.

But you didn't care at all. I was merely a puppet to you, a toy, a game. You made my Pokemon fight those who were much stronger than they were, not bothering to even heal them when they grew weary. You didn't even seem to care when each and every one of my Pokemon were K.O'd by the enemy, simply trying again, hopefully not achieving the same outcome. I suppose you were lucky this time.

The climax of my misery reached its during that one, grueling match with my best friend--now my rival--in which you were so cruel...so cruel...I swear, Blue, it wasn't my fault. I never would've wanted that to happen. He battled so ruthlessly, and you made me battle just as ruthless with him. His poor, poor Pokemon...

You made me.

KILL.

His Raticate.

Not faint. It was gone. Never coming back! It's all your fault! I lost my best friend, and now, I'm a fucking murderer! All because of you. You even manipulated Professor Oak. You made me hack and slash my way through the Elite Four, then beat down my rival.

Professor congratulated me on the win, praising my training skills. What. The hell. Did you DO to him?! I wanted to scream at him, "I don't deserve this! It's not me!" but I couldn't. It was as if you had sewed my mouth shut. I got through the Elite Four, beat my rival, received the championship title...

...and that was it. I was set free. Your presence left me, and I was in control again. Finally. I was elated, so happy, so happy that I could live life normally again...

...and then I realized...

That it's much too late. You had scarred me for life. I can't make my mother love me again. Blue will never forgive me. I can't ever bring Raticate back. Everyone, everywhere, is going to forever hate me, all because of you.

I'm taking a vow of silence, from here on. I'm never going to speak again.

I soon got permission to go to Mt. Silver, and as soon as I could, I secluded myself there. I sat there everyday, growing weaker and weaker. I had nothing left to live for. You controlled my life, and made it a living hell.

Nothing else to do.

Goodbye to you. I'm done. If you're here--I can't tell anymore--tell me, can you feel the wind on the mountain? Can you hear it? As I fall from here, I want you to know, you caused this. It's all your fault. You caused me to do this, caused my end.

Only this time, it's my choice.

Goodbye.

I hate you.

-Red
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:iconze3kyb0mb:
Ze3kyB0mb Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I will never look at Pokemon the same ever again............. To be honest Red, it could've been worst. I could've caught MissingNo
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Pokeminecafter Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013
Heh, I put Red as my player name, and I actually care if my Pokemon faint, not because it's a nuzlocke, because their Red's Pokemon. Not mine, Red's.
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advanceshipperSkitty Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I was about to do it. End the the life you ruined but before I could jump of the peak of mt silver, I heard footsteps. Then someone came up to me. I turn around to see a boy around 10 years old. Why in the world would a boy be here?! Then I realized it. You were back only this time this new boy was your pawn. I could tell he, no you wants a pokemon battle. He has pokemon for the jhoto reigon. Makes sence, you used me to conquer the kanto now your using him to conquer jhoto. You sent out a Typhlosion and I sent out my Pikachu. I wanted to be you so bad but somehow you defeated me. You used all legendary pokemon except for that Typhlosion. Some trainer you are. Before you could do anymore pain to me I flew away on my Charizard. I swore from that day forth I will defeat you. I heard of the Champion Cup in a new region called Unova. Blue's gonna be there but it doesn't matter. He still hates me for all the damaged you caused. I'm sure your gonna be there but with a new vessel. That poor soul you're using, I feel sorry for them. I still don't talk and don't plan to anytime soon. People come up to me wanting autographs from 'the legendary trainer Red'. I don't mind it, actually I love it because that name, Red, is mine. I'm not Tyler, Awesome Guy, Jamie, or any other stupid name you gave me. I am Red. I hope you're prepared to lose because this will be your last battle regardless if you win or lose.
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InvaderSava Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012
WHat's this about killing a Raticate? I never had a Gameboy... Only a DS. Does that make me a bad person?
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:icontsukaimonboom:
TsukaimonBOOM Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012
Nah. But, basically, in the first three Pokemon games, there was a battle you have with your rival in which he uses a Raticate. Later on in the game, you battle you rival again in Lavender Town tower, a place known as a graveyard for Pokemon--and he does not use that Raticate, leading to a lot of fan speculation that the player had killed said Raticate.
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:iconinvadersava:
InvaderSava Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012
OOooohhh....! That makes since. Thank you!
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:iconnicoleandmagic:
nicoleandmagic Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012
D:
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:iconlightninggonnastrike:
LightningGonnaStrike Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012  Student General Artist
I think I lost my mood to play Pokemon FireRed. -___-
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:iconwolveswithwings:
WolveswithWings Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012
welp, he doesn't die...sorry red
RED:...
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:iconshadamyrulzx3:
shadamyrulzX3 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
wow...this really makes you think..I'm sorry red...I'm sorry blue ;;w;;
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hero011 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Honestly, not once during the time I controled you did you complain. And you could of. Sure you of sounded crazy and freaked me out, but you could of. But did you? No. And btw Red, your mom does care, infact, she misses you. And if you haven't noticed, Fakem is doing horrors on your rep.
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:iconpokegurl853:
PokeGurl853 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2011
This makes me feel guilty now, I got Pokemon Red a few days ago...:sniff:
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:icontsukaimonboom:
TsukaimonBOOM Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2011
Well, I'm sure he'll feel much better knowing that you aren't meaning any harm.
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:iconpokegurl853:
PokeGurl853 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2011
Yeah...I've been reading this stuff about Pokemon and it really makes you think...What are we doing playing the games?! We're just imitating and stealing past adventures! -.-
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:iconbunnyscream67:
bunnyscream67 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2011
I wasn't mean to your pokemon Red, I ran to a center after every battle unless they were in full health!
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SwifttheFox5 Featured By Owner May 6, 2011  Student Filmographer
RED ;u; COME BAAAACK
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:icontsukaimonboom:
TsukaimonBOOM Featured By Owner May 6, 2011
DON'T LEAVE UUUUS
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:iconmstrydude:
Mstrydude Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2011
Well, if you really feel that way Red… Get the hell out of the game!
Red: Eh?
I don’t want to play as you, I want to be me. Go to your Manga or change your cloths and name and head to the Anime.
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:iconmurderer-jane:
Murderer-jane Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2011  Student Digital Artist
The creepy thing about this is.....IT MAKES SENSE 8U
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:iconturkiisandwich:
turkiisandwich Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That was amazing. I didn't check what category it was in, so when I started reading, I was completely expecting it to turn out to be about an abusive boyfriend or father.

And then I got to the seventh paragraph.

Suddenly, the fun little Pokemon games seem downright dark. It makes perfect sense why the highly esteemed Red is so silent, and merely battles and walks away. I really want to hug him now.

Amazing job.
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SilverStarlite Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
poor red... i can relate to what your feeling...
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:icontikitiel:
TikiTiel Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yay i made him happeh
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TikiTiel Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i beat red last night and felt soooo bad for him the only thing he said was ............. all the time and he looked realy sad i was like "awwwww poor red " and when he left i was like no dont go.......
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:icontsukaimonboom:
TsukaimonBOOM Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2011
I think he was kinda hoping you would beat him; at least, even if he lost, he did it on his own, not by being controlled.
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:iconshibalove:
Shibalove Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2011  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
wow, never thought of it that way...
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:iconmangaluva:
mangaluva Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2011
Wow... all these existential ones make you feel really guilty to play videogames.
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TsukaimonBOOM Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2011
It really does, doesn't it? But that wasn't truly the purpose. The actual purpose was to show that there is a side to every story, and everyone always sides with Blue. Without any evidence, they point fingers and blame Red, an innocent-minded eleven year old boy, who only wants to travel alongside Pokemon and be the greatest he can be. As if he would purposely kill his best friend's Raticate, even if he felt negative feelings toward him.
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mangaluva Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2011
It's people trying to shift their guilt. They don't want to admit that maybe, just maybe, in another's story, you might be the bad guy...
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:icontsukaimonboom:
TsukaimonBOOM Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2011
Much as we wouldn't want to believe it, we ARE the bad guy...er, girl. Whatever. I'm a girl.
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orochimarusgirl541 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2011
Hey, it's you again!:D
I like this, a lot.:D
I normally hate creepypasta's where it's the characters in the game, not people playing it, but this was really, really, good!^^ I enjoyed it!
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:iconsoraman11:
Soraman11 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2011  Student General Artist
I love you too Red.
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:iconespeon727:
espeon727 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LOVE IT.
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:iconfluffycrow:
Fluffycrow Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2011
SHUT THE HELL UP RED I MADE YOU FAMOUS 8U

But in all seriousness, this actually did creep me out. I like how you divided up the sentences in the bits where Red would get more frantic, like the whole thing with Blue's Raticate. Really adds that feeling of insanity.
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:iconmristudios:
MRIStudios Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2011
I <3 you too Red
Obvious joke is obvious.
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:icontsukaimonboom:
TsukaimonBOOM Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2011
Yep. XP
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ReturnT0Zer0 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Woow...sucks for you Red, but I have never used you, I only use that young boy in Jhoto...Wait i did see you at Mt. Silver!!!!!:O :O Don't worry I'll make that boy visit you everyday!~:heart:
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:icontsukaimonboom:
TsukaimonBOOM Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2011
I'd visit all the time if I could.
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:iconsabfrompc:
sabfrompc Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2011
I torment him and feel good about it 'cause I'm emotionally insensitive, and proud of it too. Take that you mass of pixels!
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Zariu-Kitty Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2011
...I like visiting you at Mt. Silver, Red. A lot. Are you taking care of my Butterfree still?

I chose whichever starter felt right. I think our first Pokemon was a Squirtle, eventually a Blastoise... Then Charizard every time after. We liked flying on them.

I didn't want to leave, Red. I didn't.

Then I got my own way in, but I was in Orre. I bet you could see me from Mount Silver.

Then in Hoenn.

And then I finally came back. And we had a Charizard again. Now I have a Wartortle, an Ivysaur, and lots of Charmanders - and I see you do too. I'm glad to see you don't have to travel anymore - I'm glad you got the starters you want now. I'm glad I got to battle you again, Red.

I wish you'd talk again.
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TsukaimonBOOM Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2011
I'm sure he appreciates it. Alot.
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Zariu-Kitty Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2011
^^

...Oh yeah, I heard a rumor that Red was in BW... Not sure if it's true, I think I'll check it out. XD
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:icontsukaimonboom:
TsukaimonBOOM Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2011
He is?! That'll be awesome, if it's true~
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:iconzariu-kitty:
Zariu-Kitty Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2011
Huh, I read somewhere that it was true, but every picture I see on videos of his theme is... *shudders* You know who. Not Voldemort, but... But it says NOWHERE that the charkiller is going to appear, and he needs to gtfo of Isshu and get back to his dinky little gym. Pfft, the battle with Giovanni was more fun...

Oddly enough, I can't find any battle videos of it. And I won't look at the walkthroughs because I want to wait for the game... My policy (right now, because I ruined SS for myself :< Was not fun with continuous spoilers, but I put it on myself) is I can only look at the new non-story-related features, Pokemon, and spoiler-free pages of main characters. So I know of N, the king dude, and Team Plasma, and that they're going to do some typical evil stuff, and I know of the Gym Leaders. It'll be funnn...

...I love RPing. That's my excuse for long comments. I love talking and I'm used to making long posts. <3
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:iconopalkitty102:
OpalKitty102 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2011
Dang...... -speechless-
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:icontsukaimonboom:
TsukaimonBOOM Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2011
So is Red.
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:iconopalkitty102:
OpalKitty102 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2011
I bet he is... O3o
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:icontsukaimonboom:
TsukaimonBOOM Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2011
...now I feel even worse for him than I did before. -hugs Red- Sorry I torture you so much..
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:iconopalkitty102:
OpalKitty102 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2011
I really need to go look at this stuff...
And Awwww
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:icontsukaimonboom:
TsukaimonBOOM Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2011
I can link you to one of the classics. Which would you rather look at: Creepy Black, or Lost Silver?

Poor Red...;n;
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OpalKitty102 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2011
Lost silver if it's not too much trouble
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